Review my essay

I was writtting the cons and pros for immigration Ihad written my first draft, but I still tought that it was not good enough so I needed to revise my essay and try to make it better. I had to pull out all the information that I did not needed and write more important information on itfrom some new articles that I god from the internet. I also wanted to organize my paragraph in order to make my essay better, so i did i organized my introduction my body and my conclusion. I had a little bit of trouble to develop my introduction but I was able to do it. I also corrected my grammer and my spelling because i had a few mistake.